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June 14, 2005

Will I Ever?

Will I ever see you smile at me
Put my arms around you
And feel you hold me?

Would I be welcome there?

Will I ever be able to look deep into your eyes
And search for the truth
Will I find it there?

Would I understand it?

Will I ever have the opportunity
To show you the most
Wonderful things I know and see?

Would you share the same with me?

Will I ever know that I am loved completely
And not worry
That this feeling will go away?

Will I ever be at peace?

21 Comments:

At June 14, 2005 1:32 pm, Blogger Tricia said...

Wow

Beautiful.

Made me really sad though.

You okay Celtigrrrl?

I wuuuuuuuuuv you!

 
At June 14, 2005 1:42 pm, Blogger Denny Shane said...

AN excellent piece... nicely thought-out... kinda rolls off your tongue.

 
At June 14, 2005 1:50 pm, Blogger Seamus said...

Morning Sunbeam! Beautiful writing :)
Love the new profile pic - did you put that together? - seems so you...well, maybe not the pistol...or is it? ;)

 
At June 14, 2005 2:00 pm, Blogger jp said...

I wish I were half as talented.

 
At June 14, 2005 2:34 pm, Anonymous Restless said...

That was incredible. You've made me think. :)

 
At June 14, 2005 3:12 pm, Blogger Michael said...

Will I ever know that I am loved completely
And not worry
That this feeling will go away?

That would be great, huh?

 
At June 14, 2005 3:19 pm, Blogger sydwynd said...

That was most excellent. I certainly wish you peace. I've been searching for it for many hears and I think I'm finally catching a glimpse of it. It's out there for you.

 
At June 14, 2005 3:39 pm, Blogger Julie said...

You'll find peace. And when you do, show me where it is. :)

 
At June 14, 2005 7:08 pm, Blogger Tricia said...

I posted!!!!!!!!
Whooooooooo Hoooooooo!

Now shut up and leave me alone!

 
At June 14, 2005 10:43 pm, Blogger Celti said...

Tricia - thanks. *blush* Yeah, I'm ok. I wuv you too.

Denny - thank you. It does...

Seamus - thanks. Glad you liked the pic. Like I said earlier (for the curious) - it's a photoshop manipulation. I didn't draw the girl, but I customized her. It is me. I'm a cartoon character, don't cha know? ;) *smoink*

JP - oh, but you are. You write wonderfully.

RA - thanks. thinking is good. :)

Michael - It sure would. *hugs 'cause you need 'em*

Vince - thank you. I appreciate that. Gotta keep looking.

Julie - I sure will. ;)

Tricia - ok, smartass. shrinking smartass. ;)

 
At June 15, 2005 2:10 am, Blogger Tricia said...

I have to go to my mom's tomorrow but my cell will be on if you need me.


night sweets!

 
At June 15, 2005 2:31 am, Blogger noonie said...

I love that.... just how I feel some days..

 
At June 15, 2005 6:39 am, Blogger Boobabe said...

Celti- you have captured the very essence of all of us. We all have those same desires it's just that the desires are met in some and not in others. I want to be in the "some" category too.

 
At June 15, 2005 7:03 am, Blogger Rainypete said...

Can anyone ever feel totally loved all the time? Made me wonder as a single tear rolled down my cheek.

Beautifully done, you write well for a cartoon character.

 
At June 15, 2005 7:38 am, Blogger Jennifer said...

Sure would be nice eh Celti :) HUGS

 
At June 15, 2005 8:29 am, Blogger Inanna said...

*HUGS* Beautiful.

 
At June 15, 2005 11:45 am, Blogger just me said...

I like the new picture. Can you make into a cartoon too?? ;)

And those words are very beautiful.

MUCHO GRANDE HUG-O's

 
At June 15, 2005 9:37 pm, Blogger Cootera said...

Sweet lil punk, you. Dat's all...

 
At June 15, 2005 10:44 pm, Blogger Celti said...

Tricia - enjoyed our chat - hang in there, girl. *hugs*

Noonie - thanks.

Boo - aww *blush* Yes, most definitely "some". :)

RainyPete - I hope so. thank you so much.

Jennifer - sure would. *hugs*

Nanner - *hugs* thanks

JustMe - thanks, I like her too. I could try. heh. thanks *hugs*

Cootera - awww, shucks. :)

 
At June 16, 2005 7:34 am, Blogger Tricia said...

Hey, grrrl!

Enjoyed last nights conversation
;-)

I think we seriously need a chick road trip. Grab Cooter... let's FLY!!!!!!!!!!!

 
At June 19, 2005 5:07 pm, Blogger megumi said...

It's wonderful poem. I was really moved. I had felt same thing before.
"Will I ever know that I am loved completely
And not worry
That this feeling will go away?"
That would be great.

 

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